Lonely child driven.......

kenchi18 · Jul 14, 2006, 09:36 PM

Lonely child driven to sex
Alcohol and drugs given to next
Looks to suicide inside
Depride with lonely eyes
Cries at night wonders
why so there's so much
to hide in life but the
only way to die is to
stay alive.

*TaurusDemon23* · Jul 14, 2006, 09:37 PM

Wow.......contradicting last line........

SousukeSagara · Jul 15, 2006, 03:56 AM

Hmmm... Killing himself with drugs...
Nice one... Even if it's a short one...

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jul 15, 2006, 04:10 AM

i like the way you made it
sound like you was giving up
on life very dark i like that

*Shinigami's_Angel* · Jul 16, 2006, 05:27 PM

I thought it was wonderfully dark,I like it,it's awesome!

Jul 14, 2006, 09:36 PM	#1 (permalink)
kenchi18 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the shadows Posts: 194 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 344	Lonely child driven....... Lonely child driven to sex Alcohol and drugs given to next Looks to suicide inside Depride with lonely eyes Cries at night wonders why so there's so much to hide in life but the only way to die is to stay alive. __________________ Your life means nothing to me.
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Jul 14, 2006, 09:37 PM	#2 (permalink)
TaurusDemon23 Lord Of The Wierdness Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Just swimming in the Ether.... Posts: 1,006 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 3,014	Re: Lonely child driven....... Wow.......contradicting last line........
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SousukeSagara Mercenary Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: War zones around the globe... Posts: 528 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 901	Re: Lonely child driven....... Hmmm... Killing himself with drugs... Nice one... Even if it's a short one... __________________
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Jul 15, 2006, 04:10 AM	#4 (permalink)
HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,839 Thanks: 34 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 5,581	Re: Lonely child driven....... i like the way you made it sound like you was giving up on life very dark i like that __________________
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Jul 16, 2006, 05:27 PM	#5 (permalink)
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