wow that was so freaking sweet!! nice work man.
A Lonely Day:
Today is just a normal day for me,
So lonely,
So cold,
So forgotten,
So unwanted,
I cant stand it any more,
My heart has grown,
Cold and Lonely,
I cant find any peace for my soul here.
I just do the same things over and over agian by myself,
No one careing if I die,
No one careing for me,
Im all alone,
Cant you hear my soul screaming for help,
It's so cold I can't breath anymore,
I am no longer the person I was,
I cant feel,
Pain,
Love,
Regret,
It's just a normal lonely day for me,
Wont you warm it up for me?
wow that was so freaking sweet!! nice work man.
Brilliant again........describes me.............
^_^;; It's a good poem... but... er...
Well... it's depressing.
I used to be a lone wolf, and though it was really sad, it wasn't sad everyday.
C'mon, some days you enjoy being a lone wolf!
... ¬.¬ When you're a lonewolf, you never have to worry about anyone slowing you down.
^_^;; (I love you darling! You don't slow me down! .......most of the time! But I love you! ^__^;; )
/heh
I do the best I can with what I have.
My own life is described alot in my poetry.
I was lonely so long ago.So I typed this poem to remember it.
you are very good.....................Originally Posted by viper11025
dam, tht's how i feel sometimes. tht's gd stuff there. I liked the last line, the last salvation for the loners
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
I wish they whould make a catagory for poetry people here.
Like " Poetry King "
/heh
I am getting ahead of myself, I have a few more I can do later when I have the time.
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