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![]() ![]() Credits: 5,581 | A Lonely Life Is The Best Life? The organ plays as he walks alone, the nomad , the vagabond a life never meant to have meaning , he let his heart be open once and he truly found purity of passion and love. She loved him & had a child he gave up the life that was dark and full of unexpected pain and lust , for a life that was predictable , and reassuring there was always a hope for a better day. She hugs him saying she loves him always. then tragedy takes what was once happiness and turns it into a melody for that organ to play once more , yes that pipe organ that plays its sadness. The melody beckon him back to the road to be always alone but now with a tortured soul , something that can never be gotten rid of. he stands there like a mad man laughing at the rain, no incoherancy or understandable meaning to his life. Always thinking of her and his child never daring to love or touch another person again as the road becomes his lover and his bride and his child becomes that numbness that will never go away , this man he stands alone as the night goes to day and he just wants it all to goaway forever. __________________________________________________ __ this poem is about how being alone all your life then suddenly changing how your ued to living can affect you once you let love in as well as a new life , im not saying its true for everyone but this poem is for those who would rather keep from being touched in the heart just so they can live day by day in that corner that was made just for them. comments and sugestions are welcomed
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Newbie | Re: A Lonely Life Is The Best Life? Quote:
So what I gather from this is that it is better to live alone and not get involved with another person. That is an interesting idea.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,616 | Re: A Lonely Life Is The Best Life? Once again you've managed to write another great poem. I don't know how you keep coming up with them,but I hope you always do.
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