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    A Lonely Life Is The Best Life?

    The organ plays as he walks alone,
    the nomad , the vagabond a life never
    meant to have meaning , he let his heart
    be open once and he truly found purity
    of passion and love.

    She loved him & had a child he gave
    up the life that was dark and full
    of unexpected pain and lust , for a
    life that was predictable , and reassuring
    there was always a hope for a better day.

    She hugs him saying she loves him always.
    then tragedy takes what was once happiness
    and turns it into a melody for that organ to
    play once more , yes that pipe organ that
    plays its sadness.

    The melody beckon him back to the road
    to be always alone but now with a tortured
    soul , something that can never be gotten rid of.
    he stands there like a mad man laughing at the rain,
    no incoherancy or understandable meaning to his life.

    Always thinking of her and his child never daring
    to love or touch another person again as the road
    becomes his lover and his bride and his child becomes
    that numbness that will never go away , this man he
    stands alone as the night goes to day and he just wants
    it all to goaway forever.
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    this poem is about how being alone all your life then
    suddenly changing how your ued to living can affect
    you once you let love in as well as a new life , im not
    saying its true for everyone but this poem is for those
    who would rather keep from being touched in the heart
    just so they can live day by day in that corner that
    was made just for them.

    comments and sugestions are welcomed
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    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: A Lonely Life Is The Best Life?

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    The organ plays as he walks alone,
    the nomad , the vagabond a life never
    meant to have meaning , he let his heart
    be open once and he truly found purity
    of passion and love.

    She loved him & had a child he gave
    up the life that was dark and full
    of unexpected pain and lust , for a
    life that was predictable , and reassuring
    there was always a hope for a better day.

    She hugs him saying she loves him always.
    then tragedy takes what was once happiness
    and turns it into a melody for that organ to
    play once more , yes that pipe organ that
    plays its sadness.

    The melody beckon him back to the road
    to be always alone but now with a tortured
    soul , something that can never be gotten rid of.
    he stands there like a mad man laughing at the rain,
    no incoherancy or understandable meaning to his life.

    Always thinking of her and his child never daring
    to love or touch another person again as the road
    becomes his lover and his bride and his child becomes
    that numbness that will never go away , this man he
    stands alone as the night goes to day and he just wants
    it all to goaway forever.
    __________________________________________________ __

    this poem is about how being alone all your life then
    suddenly changing how your ued to living can affect
    you once you let love in as well as a new life , im not
    saying its true for everyone but this poem is for those
    who would rather keep from being touched in the heart
    just so they can live day by day in that corner that
    was made just for them.

    comments and sugestions are welcomed

    So what I gather from this is that it is better to live alone and not get involved with another person. That is an interesting idea.

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    Re: A Lonely Life Is The Best Life?

    Once again you've managed to write another great poem. I don't know how you keep coming up with them,but I hope you always do.
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