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    Long Ago

    Long ago
    When the world was safer
    Why couldn't that happen
    These days?
    Kids going missing
    Murderers
    People being killed
    What has the world come to?
    Why is it so diffrent
    From Long ago?

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    Re: Long Ago

    short but still has a meaning and great thing to think about, i think the world is going out of order it's chaotic, loved the poem though



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    Re: Long Ago

    I think it's very nice poem ..and I like how do you think for the world now and still you did not see anything still have more nd more so you should make complet for your poem ...I like it ...keep up..

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