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    <the long wait>

    i opened my eyes and saw you
    standing by my door...
    i thought it real so i
    called out your name...
    but when i blinked and you weren't
    there, my sight began to blur
    with tears...
    i began calling out your name...
    "anonymous...anonymous..."
    why did you leave...?
    why did you abandon me...?
    why did you call and leave me...?
    i miss your smile...i miss your voice...
    i cry every night and day, because of you...
    you had be my support when i went down...
    now you abandon me and forget me...
    i was so saddened and hurt by
    you...
    i may now never be healed...
    for you have scared me
    so deep...
    that it may never be healed...
    the worst feeling is not Death, its knowing that you aren't needed,

    that you are alone in this world, and that you no longer have a reason to live...

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    Re: <the long wait>

    Thats a very nice poem n__n . I liked it n___n . I can kinda see it came somewhere real

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    Re: <the long wait>

    yea its... um... my feelings that i have piled up inside and finally was able to put it in this poem... thanks for the comment~~

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