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    Lonliness (poem)

    i'm sorry.
    it can't be this way.
    i have to leave you.
    when i thought i knew everything...
    it just explained
    of how little that i truly knew.
    and i am truly sorry.
    you're gone now.
    i'm all alone.
    do you see the pain i feel?
    no...you never realized.
    i was there for you, you stayed by my side...
    and i just watched you die.
    we were friends until the end.
    i'm sorry.
    you needed not to die.
    i didn't realize this horrible wrong until it t'was too late.
    gone forever, out of my life...
    your funny jokes, your undenying caring.
    i miss it all...
    you were my friend...the brother that i never had.
    i thought something...but it was wrong.
    and now and forever you are gone.

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    Re: Lonliness (poem)

    *Giggles*

    That was very awesome keep it up!!!!


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    Re: Lonliness (poem)

    wow man, that was freaking awesome, i like the way you wrote it, keep it up man.

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    don't really want to use ketaro-kun's words but... t'was freaking good, man... great job... i so looove the emotion... keep it up...

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    Re: Lonliness (poem)

    it is really nice ^^
    congrats for tha awesome poem
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    Re: Lonliness (poem)

    Another poet will who be my rival. This site holds many great rivals to me. I shall work harder to surpass everyone and be the best. BTW i love tht poem dude, it really stirrs my fear of being unable to save my love one. Watching her die in front of me would be the greatest pain that i could ever recevie. Keep it up swordsman.

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    hmmmmm

    sound impressive keep it up

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    that was acool poem i really liked it, it caught my attention through out
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