That was very awesome keep it up!!!!
it can't be this way.
i have to leave you.
when i thought i knew everything...
it just explained
of how little that i truly knew.
and i am truly sorry.
you're gone now.
i'm all alone.
do you see the pain i feel?
no...you never realized.
i was there for you, you stayed by my side...
and i just watched you die.
we were friends until the end.
you needed not to die.
i didn't realize this horrible wrong until it t'was too late.
gone forever, out of my life...
your funny jokes, your undenying caring.
i miss it all...
you were my friend...the brother that i never had.
i thought something...but it was wrong.
and now and forever you are gone.
-DAS- 5/14/05 8:02 pm
Author's note: no one acutally died that i know. i was just listening to a song from naruto that has a sad sound to it. another note is that this is my 1200th post. Read and Review please!!
Last edited by dark angel swordsman; May 14, 2006 at 05:23 PM.
I won't let this world exist without me! If I die, we all die! / Avatar & Signature by anime_8000.
wow man, that was freaking awesome, i like the way you wrote it, keep it up man.
don't really want to use ketaro-kun's words but... t'was freaking good, man... great job... i so looove the emotion... keep it up...
They say you can't use oversized signatures here on AO.
it is really nice ^^
congrats for tha awesome poem
I never know just why you run so far away...far away from me
Another poet will who be my rival. This site holds many great rivals to me. I shall work harder to surpass everyone and be the best. BTW i love tht poem dude, it really stirrs my fear of being unable to save my love one. Watching her die in front of me would be the greatest pain that i could ever recevie. Keep it up swordsman.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
sound impressive keep it up
I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.
A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.