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    Looking

    You don't think they're waching,
    They are looking,
    looking from away
    Oh no they seem unimpressed,
    but look and take notice,
    all impressed and secretly after the one that I've got

    Oh no,
    I notice you're not sleeping,
    I know that you're no awake,
    So where does that leave you?

    Look over there in the corner,
    all of them staring at me like I am some sorta forigner,
    I've come to take you away from here,
    anywhere is fine,
    but her is bad,
    all of them still waching, trying to pull you away,
    away from me,
    but us we'll make it through

    Oh no,
    I notice you're not sleeping,
    I know that you're no awake,
    So where does that leave you?
    That leaves you,
    leaves you far away

    Why does every one car?
    Who has the power to pry between us?
    Lets run away from here,
    together away from this place,
    run away, far away,
    you've got me, I've got you,
    So look away, be free,
    get away from them,
    now be free

    Oh no,
    I notice you're not sleeping,
    I know that you're no awake,
    So where does that leave you?

    Oh no,
    I notice you're not sleeping,
    I know that you're no awake,
    So where does that leave you?
    That leaves you,
    leaves you far away

    Oh no,
    I notice you're not sleeping,
    I know that you're no awake,
    So where does that leave you?
    That leaves you,
    leaves you far away,
    far away in a dream,
    long gone away from this place,
    enjoy the trip...
    hopefully we wont have to come back...
    I've seen all you here before at the rise and the fall, lets go down and ring the bell at the Levity Ball.

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    Re: Looking

    is this a song? hehehehe....

    chorus and all.. it is a song, not a poem right?

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    Re: Looking

    I guess that you could consider that a song, I just wrote it out...
    I've seen all you here before at the rise and the fall, lets go down and ring the bell at the Levity Ball.

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    Re: Looking

    I agree. I does seem like a song. ^_^

    There were a few spelling mistakes (I make them all the time), but other then that I really enjoyed it. It's sad and flows well too. I can't really say much else because it's different from the way I write. ^_^ I look forward to reading more or your writings. ^_^

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