Thread: Looking for a Place to Lay my head

Wow! Such a good job Lasura! I really enjoyed reading it very good job! I loved it hope to see more! ^^

Thank You Akura ^^ I'm glad you like it and enjoyed reading it... Then there is a use to post them here ^^

Originally Posted by Lasura

I might seem selfish,
But I’m only desperate-
Just a little bit of caring
Would be enough to cheer me...
Bless me... Comfort me...
…

This part really struck me. Because I've been called selfish and a number of other things that go along with it. But at the times and the actions that these people were calling selfish were DESPERATE cries for help. When I'm breaking down and lost I can't see clearly enough to not fix my own problems. And not worry about other peoples.But they call you selfish when you do you. Even though I personally don't know ANYONE more considerate of a wide spread amount of peoples feelings. Hell my "frenemy" gets emotional consideration if I know something is going ot pass her eyes or her life. Even though I know she doesn't care about the little knife stabs some of the things she passes by me gives. I still try not to do that to her. (sometimes it happens inadvertantly though.)

Yeah, I agree with bratling.

This poem really conveys your need to be cared for, even though you express it in an unorthodox way.

Great job!

Well... with me it is that even when I'm totaly desperate I still manage to think about other people... that just makes it worse... I have my problems PLUS my friend problems on my shoulders much of the time... I just must help...

Thank You again Bratling, I think this was one of the widest comments I've had in weeks...

And thank You too Devin ^^ I'm happy of you calling this a great work...

I know how that goes. So not only are you going crazy with your own bad feelings but you get to feel bad if any of your actions or methotds of helping yourself hurt anyone elses feelings or infringe on them at all. So on top of everything you get guilt too for making them feel bad. Even if you don't DO it. Because you thought it. I know how that goes. I get so sick of having to consider everyones feelings and thoughts on a matter. But...I was raised that way. And I very well know no one can go through life alone. No matter what some of us like to believe.

Laura, I almost cried reading this.
It reminds me too much of the very same cries for help I heard before the tragic day that I lost my... Well, you know. Very well written, and very powerful. Every word you wrote had to have come from the heart, because I felt every single letter in every sentence. Good job and I hope everything is okay with you. ^_^ ~S