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Reply With QuoteReading this poem shows me that you had a lot of hostility bottled up! Well you found a great way to release it by writing this poem! Keep up the good work!
BlueFox1
I wrote this the day I snapped. Its an interpretation of what goes on in my head.
Moving
Look to the Left
Water
Look to the Right
Trees
Look Forward
Death
Walls of my room closing in
Sliced by a knife of paper confetti
I am freed from it
Take the string
Strangle her to death
So what if shes your mom
She has to die some day
Look Up
Hell
Look Down
More Hell
Look Behind
Destruction
Words flying off the screen
Surrounding the necks of the children
Crush their necks until their heads come off
Blood to Water
Water to Wine
Wine to Sweat
Sweat to Vomit
Drop that bomb
Kill your family
Walk away a saint
God himself will learn to fear these hands
Reading this poem shows me that you had a lot of hostility bottled up! Well you found a great way to release it by writing this poem! Keep up the good work!
BlueFox1
It really does show how insane your thoughts are sometimes ^_^; No offence buddy, but I enjoyed this poem, keep it up! ^^
hee... I like the words u use. Creepy, yet strong meanings...
Keep it up!
Lives link to one another, and the world continues...
you know your one of the few kids that isnt afraid of saying whats in his thoughts or heart and thats what make this poem cool and yea the words or extream but really well because of the situaion your in during writing this.
and life is at its purest when you hate like this, some say its love but love isnt pure theres to many doors it could open,hate on the other hand has no door because it thrive on truth wich is always given when you hate
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
you have nice words. but i dont really know where you are going with it.
"... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."
thats great!! thank you!!
Well its just a depiction of what's inside my head. So it has many thoughts that only some would think but few will say they do. As you can see I'm unwell.
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