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    Losing A Friend

    Where did I go wrong?
    I thought we were close
    Closer than anyone can be with another person
    Sharing dreams and thoughts
    Stuck together to the very end
    When did we fall apart?
    Its not the same anymore
    A message here and there
    Maybe a call or two
    But your nothing more than a picture on Myspace
    Is this my doing?
    No it isn't
    It's no ones fault
    Things just happen
    Time passes by and people grow up
    We aren't the same anymore
    High school days are over and life moves on
    In you I have lost a friend


    Not as good as my others but I can't seem to find the words for what I wanted to say...

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    Re: Losing A Friend

    Hmm. I couldnt get into this poem. I didnt see or feel any emotion from just the words.
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    Re: Losing A Friend

    I kinda figured I just couldn't put it together the way I wanted to
    Maybe it was too soon to write it

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    Re: Losing A Friend

    i still like it, even if it is a work in progress
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    Re: Losing A Friend

    Not a bad poem at all. I understand the message that you want communicate to the reader.

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    Re: Losing A Friend

    losing a friend is like losing family, nice i really like it keep it up

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    Re: Losing A Friend

    It was a good poem. I've lost touch with a few of friends and often wondered why we don't see or call eachother anymore. I hope to find some of them someday so we could catch up on things and talk about all the fun we used to have. Nice job.
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    Re: Losing A Friend

    Oh I feel the depression and fire.
    ''life moves on''
    thats really nice
    ''people change''
    thats honest

    an i feel sorry man i know how is like to lose someone close



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