I like it! is it a poem or so? it's good. i wan tto be a writer 2! um if it was a poem that u ryme in try that a little more. it's reall good i can feel emotion from it.
The light is shining as bright as can be
Only to be what i cant see
Am i losing the light that lies with me
Am i losing the love i never realy had
Falling into the dark
Am i losing the light that can save me
I lost the light
I lost the love
I lost the chance
I....I realy want to be a writer s..so please tell me how i can improve
I like it! is it a poem or so? it's good. i wan tto be a writer 2! um if it was a poem that u ryme in try that a little more. it's reall good i can feel emotion from it.
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