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    Losing The Light

    The light is shining as bright as can be
    Only to be what i cant see
    Am i losing the light that lies with me
    Am i losing the love i never realy had
    Falling into the dark
    Am i losing the light that can save me
    I lost the light
    I lost the love
    I lost the chance



    I....I realy want to be a writer s..so please tell me how i can improve

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    Re: Losing The Light

    I like it! is it a poem or so? it's good. i wan tto be a writer 2! um if it was a poem that u ryme in try that a little more. it's reall good i can feel emotion from it.

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