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    Losing Myself

    For every mistake I've ever made,
    the price I haven't fully paid.

    Every time I slip and I fall,
    I find myself against another wall.

    To every person who led me astray,
    I hope you know you'll get yours one day.

    To every person who lent me a hand,
    I appreciate all that you did for me, man.

    Every day I wake up in fear
    that I won't end up having to shed more tears.

    Losing myself at a rapid pace
    with nowhere to go to hide my face.

    Every mistake I've ever made
    winds up to catch up to me someday.


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    Re: Losing Myself

    This poem reminds me of how life comes full circle. Very nicely done, it follows the rhythm of a circle; jus' like life. Incredible masterpiece, my friend. Thank u.

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    Re: Losing Myself

    I like how at the beginning of the poem the confidence level of it is high about karma. Then at the end the confidence level is like oh it really is like this. Does that make sense?
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    Re: Losing Myself

    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Mage View Post
    This poem reminds me of how life comes full circle. Very nicely done, it follows the rhythm of a circle; jus' like life. Incredible masterpiece, my friend. Thank u.
    Yeah, that's kinda what I was shootin' for; I'm glad you could see it that way.

    Quote Originally Posted by FallenSpiral View Post
    I like how at the beginning of the poem the confidence level of it is high about karma. Then at the end the confidence level is like oh it really is like this. Does that make sense?
    Makes perfect sense to me! I'm a huge believer of Karma. The energy you put forth is the energy you receive; what goes around, comes around. So, I try to speak of karma in a lot of ways. Poetry being one. Thanks for readin'.


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