Thread: Lost

hey wow that poem has alot of meaning 2 it great job
hope 2 see more

it was alright a little short for me but thats ok. uhm you need to add more details and the flow was choppy at the end. it seemed like you had a good message but you should work on length and captivating your readers i got bored during the middle. but overall it was good.

It was really good..
It's such a terrible feeling...
To feel lost...
I know what it means...
I feel it too even now...
So keep it up..
Want to read more..^_^

thanks i will post more soon arh i hate the 50 letter stuff

Wow that is really good, Short simple and too the point. I like it keep on writing you are really good.

It sucks when you care about someone that doesn't care for you. But when your lost, sometimes the best thing you can do for yourself, is realize, they aren't going to find you. Or don't want to. Just as your entitled to feel everything in their heart for you, they're entitled to not caring. No one can control their feelings. Only the way they treat people.

Originally Posted by bratling

It sucks when you care about someone that doesn't care for you. But when your lost, sometimes the best thing you can do for yourself, is realize, they aren't going to find you. Or don't want to. Just as your entitled to feel everything in their heart for you, they're entitled to not caring. No one can control their feelings. Only the way they treat people.

You know ... you are soo right from now on most of what I post will have been written by me a while a go but I have for the most part moved on