This was short, sweet and straight to the point. I really like how the first half of the poem rhymed. Although, once it stopped rhyming I did have to re-read it just to make sure I wasn't seeing things. It woulda been better, had the rhyming continued. But it wasn't bad! ^_^
I wish someone would help me out,
Offer me a light.
A light so that I could see,
Just where I need to be.
I like that line. It reminds me alot of my own poetry. ^_^ You did very well on this one, Chan. Mad props!