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    lost a friend

    i loved hanging around
    with my only friend

    all the things we did
    all the things we built and destroyed

    but on that day
    that awefull day

    the thing you told me
    was " you hate me from now to forever "

    i can't understand the things you said that day
    i can't believe that you destroyed my life

    how could you say
    that you feel safe inside

    after you said all that

    everything you said that day
    makes me go insane
    makes me cry in the nights
    in a place with no lights

    now that i
    i lost a close friend
    i'm lost again ,,, alone in my world
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    Re: lost a friend

    nice poem, you sure do get around

    btw, this is Phil, from national anime, formerly known as anime4ever, hopefully my name rings a bell.

    keep up teh good work, I look forward to your next poem man.

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    Re: lost a friend

    i liked the poem. i know the feeling. nice work, keep it up. and of course, sorry about your loss.
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    Re: lost a friend

    That's a one interesting poem..... You have wrong spelling there but keep it up...
    You're good^^
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: lost a friend

    this poem sounds familiar.. like you have posted this before.. anyway..it's okee. but needs some touching up...
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    Re: lost a friend

    it's got a good feeling towards it. Nice poem.


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