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    Lost Inspiration

    Here's my newest poem. Tell me what you think.

    The words just don’t come
    Maybe my heart is too cold
    Where’s my inspiration
    It is lost in the night
    I can’t find it in this starless sky
    Will it fly back to me
    Or is it a bird with a broken wing
    Can something so important
    Never really come back to me
    I just don’t feel it
    Even if I close my eyes and concentrate
    Was it ever really there?
    Sometimes it all just seems like a dream
    Could an illusion be so sweet
    As that muse seemed to me
    The truth has been forgotten
    Buried in so many lies
    If I’m awake now
    If it wasn’t reality
    Then this must be the nightmare
    It’d rather sleep again
    Maybe there in my slumber
    I’ll see it one more time
    Feel it in my soul
    Could it let my heart beat again?
    But even that too is just a reverie

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    Re: Lost Inspiration

    Stanzas are a wondeful tool to use while writing poetry, they add flow.
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