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    Lost Love

    Laughing laughing
    At my jokes
    Screaming crying inside of me
    having fun
    with all my friends
    Streams of tears drip down my heart
    I smile when i see you
    You smile when you see me
    I bleed when i see you
    you smile when you see me
    Screaming crying inside
    Laughing smiling i wave to you.
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    Re: Lost Love

    wow nice
    but i think it could've been written a bit more
    but i ain't you to know what you feal
    i am one that understands it
    is it me or you still love the one you lost?
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    Re: Lost Love

    Well in all honesty... it has a good meaning set into it. But it could hav been conveyed a little better.

    Keep up the good work anyway, I look forward to seeing more in the future. ^_^

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    Re: Lost Love

    u could have written more but i like this short poem it was good bud! keep up the hard work.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Reese
    Well in all honesty... it has a good meaning set into it. But it could hav been conveyed a little better.

    Keep up the good work anyway, I look forward to seeing more in the future. ^_^
    And you will see me alot more in the future reese

    and XxStormySkyexX keep trying you will get someday

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    mmmmm.... I agree with Reese. U didnt create much of an atmosphere to the poem.... But keep up the good work. I look forward to watching ur improvement over time.
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    @ Sora : ..... ??? Wat ?? Okay... watever that means, LOL. ^_^

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    Re: Lost Love

    Thanks all, I kinda 4 got to put to lines in...i was wondering why it was so short!. but ok, it should be a little better now i hope.
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