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Reply With Quotewow nice
but i think it could've been written a bit more
but i ain't you to know what you feal
i am one that understands it
is it me or you still love the one you lost?
Laughing laughing
At my jokes
Screaming crying inside of me
having fun
with all my friends
Streams of tears drip down my heart
I smile when i see you
You smile when you see me
I bleed when i see you
you smile when you see me
Screaming crying inside
Laughing smiling i wave to you.
Last edited by XxStormySkyexX; May 23, 2006 at 11:51 AM.
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wow nice
but i think it could've been written a bit more
but i ain't you to know what you feal
i am one that understands it
is it me or you still love the one you lost?
Last edited by Archy; May 08, 2006 at 01:46 PM.
I never know just why you run so far away...far away from me
Well in all honesty... it has a good meaning set into it. But it could hav been conveyed a little better.
Keep up the good work anyway, I look forward to seeing more in the future. ^_^
u could have written more but i like this short poem it was good bud! keep up the hard work.
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I will fight until i find what i'm looking for...you can not judge me on my apperence I am a Warrior. If you have a problem with me..... then my blades will meet your neck.
Re: Lost Love And you will see me alot more in the future reeseOriginally Posted by Reese
and XxStormySkyexX keep trying you will get someday
I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.
A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm
mmmmm.... I agree with Reese. U didnt create much of an atmosphere to the poem.... But keep up the good work. I look forward to watching ur improvement over time.
Sig courtesy goes to : Sazuka. [Sig team]
@ Sora : ..... ??? Wat ?? Okay... watever that means, LOL. ^_^
Thanks all, I kinda 4 got to put to lines in...i was wondering why it was so short!. but ok, it should be a little better now i hope.
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