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Here is a weird poem that i wrote, i hope you all like it.
Quote:
As I walk to your burial place.
I realize how much I have lost.
I keep remembering all the memories we made.
Like when we used to do it with a adoring lust.
As the hours of darkness draw near.
My heart feels a sudden fear.
The anguishing fear of not having you with me.
However, I have to accept the fact that you not longer live.
wow wow nice i love that very deep of feeling ...
i unerstand that you lost some one ..:rolleyes1:..
by the way that was very nice ...keep up....
Gosh, nice one there ketaro.. haven't been seeing you much lately, nice to see you write poems ^^ Pretty good at it too. I think it was very thoughtful, how you're able to express you moving on in the form of words. Nice one.
it sounds like a wedo goin ro the grave of her husben or bf
it real sad but its sooo good plz keep it up kk ^__^