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    Cool Lost my Piece

    I lost my piece of love,
    but kept my piece of mind.
    Though, I'll admit for a while,
    I lost my peace and pride.

    I lost companionship,
    but my heart is still in tact.
    Even though I thought it left
    and I would never have it back.

    Lost my koibito,
    but I kept my best friend;
    and I'm sure that we'll stay
    that way until the very end.

    I also lost my light,
    but found beauty in the dark.
    No longer will I worry about
    matters of the heart.

    I lost my piece of love,
    but kept my piece of mind.
    Time to move around and
    claim another as mine.


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    Re: Lost my Piece

    Beautiful words, man. This poem was a very inspirin' piece of work. I thoughly enjoy ur work, hope u keep it up.

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    Re: Lost my Piece

    THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!
    i loved it.!!!!
    the rhyme was perfect i think.
    And the flow was great. I didn't see anything wrong with it.
    Keep up the good work. ^^

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
    ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~

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    Re: Lost my Piece

    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Mage View Post
    Beautiful words, man. This poem was a very inspirin' piece of work. I thoughly enjoy ur work, hope u keep it up.
    Quote Originally Posted by P.R. Princes View Post
    THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!
    i loved it.!!!!
    the rhyme was perfect i think.
    And the flow was great. I didn't see anything wrong with it.
    Keep up the good work. ^^
    Hey, I appreciate you two taking the time to read my work. Lately--up until this poem was posted--I have had problems, as far as writing poetry was concerned. I hit a posting slump. When I did write, it was hot garbage (in my opinion), so the fact that you two like it so much makes me happy, proud and I feel privileged to have readers such as yourself.

    Thank you!


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