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    Otaku Crab Ball Champion, TurtleSnake Champion, Dibblez Party Champion zoolivemonster is off to a good start
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    The Lost One

    Here lies the lost one,
    alone and desolate,
    in a place far from home.

    She cries black tears,
    for the pain held inside,
    she tries to cure the anguish,
    but she made it stronger as time went by.

    She has no family,
    no friends,
    her life has no meaning,
    it's time for this to end.

    She knows there is no other way,
    this time she cuts deep,
    feeling the blood pump out,
    makes her fall into eternal sleep.

    Here lies the lost one,
    friends and family gather,
    "We are here today,"
    they watch with sorrow and guilt,
    as she watches them from a place they'll never be,
    maybe they'll understand now,
    as she rests peacefully.
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    Re: The Lost One

    wow actually amazes in your way you expressed being alone in the middle of nowhere..>>>
    Hey it seems like an EMO or an loner who doesn`t feel to join any groups of people and
    any Socialte groups..>>>
    Farewell then.....>>
    See you tommorow..>>
    have a nice day..>>>
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: The Lost One

    really beautiful again details are right on point
    especially the last stanza was a perfect way to end it ^^
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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    THANKS! One day I was depressed and so I wrote it and it turned out awesome! I will keep posting poems, so get ready for the next enstallment.
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    Re: The Lost One

    sweetness^^ the best poems come from people with alot of emotion running through their souls ^^
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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    Re: The Lost One

    YOU HAVE NO IDEA! I have so many emoitions running through my blood, it's not even funny
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    you just have to learn how to channel them through in good and helpful ways
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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    Re: The Lost One

    wow, that's kinda dark, and very good, how did you come up with it?

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