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    Exclamation The Lost Shadow

    Lately I've noticed you been ignoring me
    Turnin' you're head when I look you in the eyes
    Snaching away when I hold you're hand

    I think I'm the problem
    Cuz youd rather be with You're friends
    And leave me alone to wonder when
    You will be back
    So we can share our stories
    and tell eachother jokes

    I'll wait for you around the back
    Sitting and waiting for you to return
    So when you come back to me
    Tell me everything
    I want to know where you went
    I want to know what you did

    And tell me why you decided to depart from my side

    Still I stand by, and fill in time
    eager to see you're face
    When you come to me
    The smile I await for
    You apoligize to me
    And Hug me tight
    Our lips will touch
    And we will go back to yesterday
    When You told me I'm You're Queen
    And you chased me down a path so famillier
    The path that led us to one another
    Where we held hands
    and sang beautuiful songs together

    But till then I'll sit myself down
    and watch the spot I last saw you
    When you ran down that same path
    And disapeared into the green
    And left me here
    With the highest hopes you'll ever recieve

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    Re: The Lost Shadow

    wow this is great first love is like this
    you get to experince disapointment
    and hapiness you expressed this well
    iin the way you wrote the poem very awesome
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Lost Shadow

    sounds like a teenager's problem and a song/.
    but it has some good meanings there. The sorrows of waiting and thinking too much wheter it's our own fault.
    did i got this right ?
    no?
    <is dumb. baa.. T_T keep it up, star~!! X3
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    Re: The Lost Shadow

    good job =) the poem makes sense. It's really nice..at least you dont rhyme alot..seems like ur expressing yourself. Well Good job ^_^ (sorry if I said anything bad/ dumb lol.)

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    Re: The Lost Shadow

    wow man that was sweet, keep it up.

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    Re: The Lost Shadow

    There were a few grammer errors...but nice job ^_^

    You left the ending myterious.... I hope it doesn't have much meaning to it...coz it seems like he's cheating on you Nice job anyways..

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