wow this is great first love is like this
you get to experince disapointment
and hapiness you expressed this well
iin the way you wrote the poem very awesome
Lately I've noticed you been ignoring me
Turnin' you're head when I look you in the eyes
Snaching away when I hold you're hand
I think I'm the problem
Cuz youd rather be with You're friends
And leave me alone to wonder when
You will be back
So we can share our stories
and tell eachother jokes
I'll wait for you around the back
Sitting and waiting for you to return
So when you come back to me
Tell me everything
I want to know where you went
I want to know what you did
And tell me why you decided to depart from my side
Still I stand by, and fill in time
eager to see you're face
When you come to me
The smile I await for
You apoligize to me
And Hug me tight
Our lips will touch
And we will go back to yesterday
When You told me I'm You're Queen
And you chased me down a path so famillier
The path that led us to one another
Where we held hands
and sang beautuiful songs together
But till then I'll sit myself down
and watch the spot I last saw you
When you ran down that same path
And disapeared into the green
And left me here
With the highest hopes you'll ever recieve
wow this is great first love is like this
you get to experince disapointment
and hapiness you expressed this well
iin the way you wrote the poem very awesome
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
sounds like a teenager's problem and a song/.
but it has some good meanings there. The sorrows of waiting and thinking too much wheter it's our own fault.
did i got this right ?
no?
<is dumb. baa.. T_T keep it up, star~!! X3
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good job =) the poem makes sense. It's really nice..at least you dont rhyme alot..seems like ur expressing yourself. Well Good job ^_^ (sorry if I said anything bad/ dumb lol.)
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wow man that was sweet, keep it up.
There were a few grammer errors...but nice job ^_^
You left the ending myterious....I hope it doesn't have much meaning to it...coz it seems like he's cheating on you
Nice job anyways..
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