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    Lost(yet another boring poem if you want to read)

    I am lost, and can't be found
    People searching, all around.

    Where I am, they cannot go
    Will I return, I do not know.

    This is my life, this is my death
    I close my eyes, and take a breath.

    When I wake, what do I see
    Many people surrounding me.

    I try to scream, but not a sound
    As they lay me, beneath the ground.

    What is wrong, they are so near
    But when I yell, they do not hear.

    I see some people, start to cry
    They all wonder, why did I die.

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    Re: Lost(yet another boring poem if you want to read)

    Hmm. It was good for a short rhyming poem. There was a beginning, middle, and ending. Cool.
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