Lost(yet another boring poem if you want to read)

!flaminghate · Feb 18, 2007, 01:07 AM

I am lost, and can't be found
People searching, all around.

Where I am, they cannot go
Will I return, I do not know.

This is my life, this is my death
I close my eyes, and take a breath.

When I wake, what do I see
Many people surrounding me.

I try to scream, but not a sound
As they lay me, beneath the ground.

What is wrong, they are so near
But when I yell, they do not hear.

I see some people, start to cry
They all wonder, why did I die.

*Kasai* · Feb 18, 2007, 05:16 AM

Hmm. It was good for a short rhyming poem. There was a beginning, middle, and ending. Cool.

Feb 18, 2007, 01:07 AM	#1 (permalink)
!flaminghate Banned Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Immortal, till I die Posts: 464 Thanks: 4 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 1,783	Lost(yet another boring poem if you want to read) I am lost, and can't be found People searching, all around. Where I am, they cannot go Will I return, I do not know. This is my life, this is my death I close my eyes, and take a breath. When I wake, what do I see Many people surrounding me. I try to scream, but not a sound As they lay me, beneath the ground. What is wrong, they are so near But when I yell, they do not hear. I see some people, start to cry They all wonder, why did I die.
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Feb 18, 2007, 05:16 AM	#2 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,490	Re: Lost(yet another boring poem if you want to read) Hmm. It was good for a short rhyming poem. There was a beginning, middle, and ending. Cool. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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