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    Re: Love

    this is ur first time trying to write a poem? well the revised verison is better. U should read some of the other love poems around this section. Maybe it could help u to improve.

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    So strong, it’s hard to forget,
    Like riding a bike or driving a car
    This part is kinda kool, you comparing love like a bike and driving a car, lol the poem is pretty kool.

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    Re: Love

    love the poem... so touching.. well honestly i was moved by that.... ^^ well as for the grammar.... i'm having that problems too!! we cant avoid it.. hehehe

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    Re: Love

    i love it i love the emotions and everything very good work keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Love

    Do not post in threads that have been dead for longer then 14 days.

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