wow did you have a bad day when you wrote this?
Here is another poem, In this particular one the content is just nonsense, though in the peotry world is well known as free verse.
Love is a knife
Love can cut your heart in half
Be aware of its evil
Be alert because it can kill you
Love can be sweet
A sweet poison that will only kill you
Love can be sour
A taste that will make you cry
Love is just a vague feeling
Love doesn't buy
Love can hurt sometimes
Love can cure loniness
Love can lead to sadness
Love is just evil
Thanks for your comment, well i honestly wrote this poem because i was kinda mad today.
wow, this was great!! everything you said about love was true... *sniff sniff*
anyway, once again, great job, ketaro! GO GO GO ketaro!!! hehe... lol.. happy birthday...
They say you can't use oversized signatures here on AO.
right you areOriginally Posted by ketaro
the most evil thing on earth
but we are all craving for that evil
untill we have it, lose it, and figure that it was better without it
and i must say this is one of my favorite poems till now
keep it up and give me more
I never know just why you run so far away...far away from me
i can see where you are coming from..................i know i have a day like this where i just don't see the point of love but then there are other days that are better!
But i like none the less!
Nice poem Ketaro!!!
It's true, most of the time.
What is evil? Is being loyal to what
you say is right all it takes to make me good?