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Old Sep 10, 2006, 10:02 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A Love

I wish I could tell you I love you
Because I know I really do
You are my best friend
There for me till the end
Your words have made me cry
But each one was perfectly right
The sweet things you say
That make me feel ok
You’re there when tears fall
You’d catch and wipe away them all
You make me laugh late at night
We really do click, you are right
I’ve told you so much
No one else’s ears could touch
You know my every feeling
Your theories get my mind reeling
You’ve easily become the one
I like to laugh with when the day is done
So because you are my true friend
Who I trust to be there in the end
I’ll say this because it really is true
You’re a really fun person,
I love you.

~ Julia

I wrote this for my friend because I don't think people tell their friends they love them enough. There's more than one kind of love and too many people only use one and don't even mean it. So this was to my best friend. Hope you liked it.
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Old Sep 10, 2006, 10:10 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: A Love

how to say this
that was awesome , your great words made a great poem , very meaningful and beautiful, gave alot of feelings
nice one^^
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Old Sep 10, 2006, 10:15 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: A Love

very awesome poem i liked how you described fridnships its rare to have something like this and when you do get it keep it because freidns are more valuble than a bf or gf no lie because i have seen alot of bad brak up and they always run to the best freind .and you described this perfectly awesome poem once again cant wait to read another
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Old Sep 10, 2006, 10:19 PM   #4 (permalink)
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very awesome poem i liked how you described fridnships its rare to have something like this and when you do get it keep it because freidns are more valuble than a bf or gf no lie because i have seen alot of bad brak up and they always run to the best freind .and you described this perfectly awesome poem once again cant wait to read another
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Old Sep 11, 2006, 12:00 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: A Love

you are absolutly right, people think there's only one kind of love, and also people don't tell enough to their friends that they love them, best friends sometimes pass unnoticed. The poem really let's the reader feel that other kind of love, that exist between friends, that people usually maybe don't even know about.
Great poem!
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Old Sep 11, 2006, 12:46 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: A Love

... i do not understand what is love... the true one.

but.. that was great.
you have a big love.
and can fill it into your poetry..
i hope him/her is truely a good friend.

some how i feel your love is too big...haha.. maybe because i do not like risk.
haha.. forget the 2 last sentences.

hei, what is your next poetry?
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Old Sep 11, 2006, 02:29 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Re: A Love

Great Job! I like the way you took this one for a min I thought you were talking about the love of you life, in all actuality you were talking about your friend who means a lot to you! Awesome Poem!!!!

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Re: A Love

Such passionate poem, with a strong meaning ^^ Keep it up!
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Old Sep 11, 2006, 03:09 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Re: A Love

There was emotion. But the poem seemed stiff. Soem verses didnt transition well, and it just seemed dusty. Nothing fresh about the poem.
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Re: A Love

..And it would be better if you entitled the poem My love for my Best Friend...almost any other poem has love entitled in it so making another titale would be better....but it's still a good one...^_^
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Re: A Love

o.0 interesting.. Hmm.. A bit to straight forward for me.. try rewording some stuff to make it sound more.. "fancy" if you will.. spice it up a bit.. catch the readers eye, but the emotion was strong,

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