A Love

Sincere · Sep 10, 2006, 10:02 PM

I wish I could tell you I love you
Because I know I really do
You are my best friend
There for me till the end
Your words have made me cry
But each one was perfectly right
The sweet things you say
That make me feel ok
You’re there when tears fall
You’d catch and wipe away them all
You make me laugh late at night
We really do click, you are right
I’ve told you so much
No one else’s ears could touch
You know my every feeling
Your theories get my mind reeling
You’ve easily become the one
I like to laugh with when the day is done
So because you are my true friend
Who I trust to be there in the end
I’ll say this because it really is true
You’re a really fun person,
I love you.

~ Julia

I wrote this for my friend because I don't think people tell their friends they love them enough. There's more than one kind of love and too many people only use one and don't even mean it. So this was to my best friend. Hope you liked it.

powerxxx · Sep 10, 2006, 10:10 PM

how to say this
that was awesome , your great words made a great poem , very meaningful and beautiful, gave alot of feelings
nice one^^

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Sep 10, 2006, 10:15 PM

very awesome poem i liked how you described fridnships its rare to have something like this and when you do get it keep it because freidns are more valuble than a bf or gf no lie because i have seen alot of bad brak up and they always run to the best freind .and you described this perfectly awesome poem once again cant wait to read another

Sincere · Sep 10, 2006, 10:19 PM

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Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice

very awesome poem i liked how you described fridnships its rare to have something like this and when you do get it keep it because freidns are more valuble than a bf or gf no lie because i have seen alot of bad brak up and they always run to the best freind .and you described this perfectly awesome poem once again cant wait to read another

Trust me, I know what is of value in my life.

Thanks. For everything.

KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR · Sep 11, 2006, 12:00 AM

you are absolutly right, people think there's only one kind of love, and also people don't tell enough to their friends that they love them, best friends sometimes pass unnoticed. The poem really let's the reader feel that other kind of love, that exist between friends, that people usually maybe don't even know about.
Great poem!

baikuza · Sep 11, 2006, 12:46 AM

... i do not understand what is love... the true one.

but.. that was great.
you have a big love.
and can fill it into your poetry..
i hope him/her is truely a good friend.

some how i feel your love is too big...haha.. maybe because i do not like risk.
haha.. forget the 2 last sentences.

hei, what is your next poetry?

*BlueFox1* · Sep 11, 2006, 02:29 AM

Great Job! I like the way you took this one for a min I thought you were talking about the love of you life, in all actuality you were talking about your friend who means a lot to you! Awesome Poem!!!!

BlueFox1

*Rave_Grip* · Sep 11, 2006, 03:05 AM

Such passionate poem, with a strong meaning ^^ Keep it up!

*Kasai* · Sep 11, 2006, 03:09 AM

There was emotion. But the poem seemed stiff. Soem verses didnt transition well, and it just seemed dusty. Nothing fresh about the poem.

Pride_Edward · Sep 11, 2006, 04:17 AM

..And it would be better if you entitled the poem My love for my Best Friend...almost any other poem has love entitled in it so making another titale would be better....but it's still a good one...^_^

-=Broken^Halo=- · Sep 11, 2006, 04:34 AM

o.0 interesting.. Hmm.. A bit to straight forward for me.. try rewording some stuff to make it sound more.. "fancy" if you will.. spice it up a bit.. catch the readers eye, but the emotion was strong,

-Keep it up ^.^

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Sincere Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Justin's heart Posts: 307 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 364	A Love I wish I could tell you I love you Because I know I really do You are my best friend There for me till the end Your words have made me cry But each one was perfectly right The sweet things you say That make me feel ok You’re there when tears fall You’d catch and wipe away them all You make me laugh late at night We really do click, you are right I’ve told you so much No one else’s ears could touch You know my every feeling Your theories get my mind reeling You’ve easily become the one I like to laugh with when the day is done So because you are my true friend Who I trust to be there in the end I’ll say this because it really is true You’re a really fun person, I love you. ~ Julia I wrote this for my friend because I don't think people tell their friends they love them enough. There's more than one kind of love and too many people only use one and don't even mean it. So this was to my best friend. Hope you liked it. __________________ $C:\Documents and Settings\Julia\My Documents\My Pictures\Siggy.jpg$ A white rose no longer alone I know who's heart it is to represent I didn't pick it, but i let it grow For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
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powerxxx Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere on this planet Posts: 131 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 310	Re: A Love how to say this that was awesome , your great words made a great poem , very meaningful and beautiful, gave alot of feelings nice one^^ __________________ Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali I Fly Swiftly through the air I Spread My Wings Without A trace
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KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: somewhere in between dreams Posts: 108 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 230	Re: A Love you are absolutly right, people think there's only one kind of love, and also people don't tell enough to their friends that they love them, best friends sometimes pass unnoticed. The poem really let's the reader feel that other kind of love, that exist between friends, that people usually maybe don't even know about. Great poem! __________________ Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (: Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
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BlueFox1 Devoted Otaku Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,286	Re: A Love Great Job! I like the way you took this one for a min I thought you were talking about the love of you life, in all actuality you were talking about your friend who means a lot to you! Awesome Poem!!!! BlueFox1
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Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,616	Re: A Love There was emotion. But the poem seemed stiff. Soem verses didnt transition well, and it just seemed dusty. Nothing fresh about the poem. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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Pride_Edward Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 247 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: A Love ..And it would be better if you entitled the poem My love for my Best Friend...almost any other poem has love entitled in it so making another titale would be better....but it's still a good one...^_^ __________________ Our own site: http://www.fma-adikz.tk
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