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    A Love

    I wish I could tell you I love you
    Because I know I really do
    You are my best friend
    There for me till the end
    Your words have made me cry
    But each one was perfectly right
    The sweet things you say
    That make me feel ok
    You’re there when tears fall
    You’d catch and wipe away them all
    You make me laugh late at night
    We really do click, you are right
    I’ve told you so much
    No one else’s ears could touch
    You know my every feeling
    Your theories get my mind reeling
    You’ve easily become the one
    I like to laugh with when the day is done
    So because you are my true friend
    Who I trust to be there in the end
    I’ll say this because it really is true
    You’re a really fun person,
    I love you.

    ~ Julia

    I wrote this for my friend because I don't think people tell their friends they love them enough. There's more than one kind of love and too many people only use one and don't even mean it. So this was to my best friend. Hope you liked it.
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    Re: A Love

    how to say this
    that was awesome , your great words made a great poem , very meaningful and beautiful, gave alot of feelings
    nice one^^
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    Re: A Love

    very awesome poem i liked how you described fridnships its rare to have something like this and when you do get it keep it because freidns are more valuble than a bf or gf no lie because i have seen alot of bad brak up and they always run to the best freind .and you described this perfectly awesome poem once again cant wait to read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: A Love

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    very awesome poem i liked how you described fridnships its rare to have something like this and when you do get it keep it because freidns are more valuble than a bf or gf no lie because i have seen alot of bad brak up and they always run to the best freind .and you described this perfectly awesome poem once again cant wait to read another
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    Re: A Love

    you are absolutly right, people think there's only one kind of love, and also people don't tell enough to their friends that they love them, best friends sometimes pass unnoticed. The poem really let's the reader feel that other kind of love, that exist between friends, that people usually maybe don't even know about.
    Great poem!
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    Re: A Love

    ... i do not understand what is love... the true one.

    but.. that was great.
    you have a big love.
    and can fill it into your poetry..
    i hope him/her is truely a good friend.

    some how i feel your love is too big...haha.. maybe because i do not like risk.
    haha.. forget the 2 last sentences.

    hei, what is your next poetry?

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    Re: A Love

    Great Job! I like the way you took this one for a min I thought you were talking about the love of you life, in all actuality you were talking about your friend who means a lot to you! Awesome Poem!!!!

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    Re: A Love

    Such passionate poem, with a strong meaning ^^ Keep it up!

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