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that was awesome , your great words made a great poem , very meaningful and beautiful, gave alot of feelings
nice one^^
I wish I could tell you I love you
Because I know I really do
You are my best friend
There for me till the end
Your words have made me cry
But each one was perfectly right
The sweet things you say
That make me feel ok
You’re there when tears fall
You’d catch and wipe away them all
You make me laugh late at night
We really do click, you are right
I’ve told you so much
No one else’s ears could touch
You know my every feeling
Your theories get my mind reeling
You’ve easily become the one
I like to laugh with when the day is done
So because you are my true friend
Who I trust to be there in the end
I’ll say this because it really is true
You’re a really fun person,
I love you.
~ Julia
I wrote this for my friend because I don't think people tell their friends they love them enough. There's more than one kind of love and too many people only use one and don't even mean it. So this was to my best friend. Hope you liked it.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
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that was awesome , your great words made a great poem , very meaningful and beautiful, gave alot of feelings
nice one^^
Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
I Fly Swiftly through the air
I Spread My Wings Without A trace
very awesome poem i liked how you described fridnships its rare to have something like this and when you do get it keep it because freidns are more valuble than a bf or gf no lie because i have seen alot of bad brak up and they always run to the best freind .and you described this perfectly awesome poem once again cant wait to read another
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Trust me, I know what is of value in my life.Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice
Thanks. For everything.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
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you are absolutly right, people think there's only one kind of love, and also people don't tell enough to their friends that they love them, best friends sometimes pass unnoticed. The poem really let's the reader feel that other kind of love, that exist between friends, that people usually maybe don't even know about.
Great poem!
Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:
Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
... i do not understand what is love... the true one.
but.. that was great.
you have a big love.
and can fill it into your poetry..
i hope him/her is truely a good friend.
some how i feel your love is too big...haha.. maybe because i do not like risk.
haha.. forget the 2 last sentences.
hei, what is your next poetry?
Great Job! I like the way you took this one for a min I thought you were talking about the love of you life, in all actuality you were talking about your friend who means a lot to you! Awesome Poem!!!!
BlueFox1
Such passionate poem, with a strong meaning ^^ Keep it up!
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