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Reply With Quote..And it would be better if you entitled the poem My love for my Best Friend...almost any other poem has love entitled in it so making another titale would be better....but it's still a good one...^_^
There was emotion. But the poem seemed stiff. Soem verses didnt transition well, and it just seemed dusty. Nothing fresh about the poem.
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..And it would be better if you entitled the poem My love for my Best Friend...almost any other poem has love entitled in it so making another titale would be better....but it's still a good one...^_^
o.0 interesting.. Hmm.. A bit to straight forward for me.. try rewording some stuff to make it sound more.. "fancy" if you will.. spice it up a bit.. catch the readers eye, but the emotion was strong,
-Keep it up ^.^
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