very passionate very self-esteem and very good, nice job
Love
I thought you felt the same way.
When we held each other I prayed you would stay.
I loved the way you looked at me.
I guess it just wasn't meant to be.
I thought you loved me undesirably.
Didn't you know you were my everything.
You were all I thought about.
In my mind there was no doubt.
Now I see your not in love.
It wasn't something from above.
You're with her now and you're happy.
I'm the one who's mopey and sappy.
That's ok though because if I had to pick the one to suffer
I'm glad it was me. I love you more than ever.
My love for you will never go away.
But to tell you that I would never say.
It's so hard to let you go.
But it's now time to move on slow.
So this is my goodbye.
My darling, my love, my only one.
for This is the last time I will cry.
<O: this is and was dedicated to someone irl. comments please>
very passionate very self-esteem and very good, nice job
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Try different styles of formatting your poetry. Using the same style over and over again begins to annoy some readers.
Seduced by Flesh
i liked this poem as a way of saying good bye when you know the love is gone
its sad but lif goes on.awesome poem i liked it alot a dnthat is what i got from reading it
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
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