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![]() ![]() Credits: 16,042 | Love Love is it good or bad Because it can be a heart brake Or an ever lasting love So what kind of love would you like? Because I know witch one I would like So what about you a love Over all love all love For wealth and good looks So witch one are you like. |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 14,832 | Hehe what Kat said, use better wording and make a lil more bigger. As usual your poems are realistics and I loved them ^.^
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,176 | I would have to say I would take a love over all love! This poem really didn't seem like a normal poem, but still expressed what the writer was trying to say. Good job!
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Diamond in the Rough | The poem is kinda short and some spellings are wrong,spellcheck is needed too so that the readers could understand it better. Equinn,maybe you can do a better job next time...as for this poem,its short but meaningful... By the way Equinn,did you mean heart break or brake? Just clearing things up...A good poem critic corrects all the wrongs of a poem and its better than it isn't corrected... |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 32,460 | sounds a bit weird...but it could be one that turns into a great poem if reworked ![]()
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