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    Love

    Love is it good or bad
    Because it can be a heart brake
    Or an ever lasting love
    So what kind of love would you like?
    Because I know witch one I would like
    So what about you a love
    Over all love all love
    For wealth and good looks
    So witch one are you like.

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    o.o hmmmm~

    Seems more like info giving than a poem~

    But it all works out in the end.

    Use better wording, and be more free with it. It feel like Facts

    Beside that. I like poems, so of course I am going to like this one~
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    Hehe what Kat said, use better wording and make a lil more bigger. As usual your poems are realistics and I loved them ^.^

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    I would have to say I would take a love over all love! This poem really didn't seem like a normal poem, but still expressed what the writer was trying to say. Good job!

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    The poem is kinda short and some spellings are wrong,spellcheck is needed too so that the readers could understand it better. Equinn,maybe you can do a better job next time...as for this poem,its short but meaningful...
    By the way Equinn,did you mean heart break or brake? Just clearing things up...A good poem critic corrects all the wrongs of a poem and its better than it isn't corrected...

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    ok thanks for that and i will really try to do longer ones (if i can)

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    sounds a bit weird...but it could be one that turns into a great poem if reworked
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