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    thank you im really glad you all likemy poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon


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    I like the random feel of the poem! It's the writer's thoughts combined into a poem and in my opinion that's a hard thing to do! If I may a suggestion, Kasai has a good point of as you're thinking of your poem put in a book for only your eyes and make corrections as you go, just a thought! Still very well done!

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    thankies ive actulley been doing that lately but you know how it is when you get those feelings you just cant let them fly you gotta capture them and thet them flow
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    That's very true! I'm glad I could be a little help to you! I know that you will become a great writer! You've already shown me that you are on the road to becoming one with this poem! Unfortunately my poem "Tormented by You" didn't do so hot it's on page two! Oh well I'll be looking for more poems from you!

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    thankies ummm i look for your poem trust me like you said with just a few improvements the poem would be great
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    Re: Love

    Awww I love this poem it's beautiful!!! and the words very perfect
    “If I were the rain that binds together the earth and the sky, whom in all mingle, would I be able to bind two hearts together?”- Orinime Inoue

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