LinkBack URL
About LinkBacks
Reply With QuoteWow, I actually like this poem. But how you used the repetition I'm not very fond of.
All my life I have been waiting.
Waiting for the one.
The one who will love me for me.
Not as someone else.
I don’t want to live in the shadows of my live.
I want to live it.
But..But I don’t know if I should because I’m not like the other girls here.
I’m crazier, weirder if I most tell the truth.
But if I was would you still love me.
Love me for being who I am
And not for being what I’m not.
so please tell me that you will love me for who and what I am.
Wow, I actually like this poem. But how you used the repetition I'm not very fond of.
Seduced by Flesh
nice me like!!!!!!!!!!!so sad!!!!
keep it up
poohs my boo
I think you ment life instead of live... As for the poem, I can relate to that feeling of fear of rejection. I was so worried about it at one point that I made myself sick. Don't worry about it. I like this poem... good job!!!I don’t want to live in the shadows of my live.
Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.
I like the style of poem the only suggestion I would make would be change live to life and most to must! Other than that keep up the great work!
wow, i'm impressed, and frankly, i think you caught my girlfriends attitude really well, i think she'd sometimes say something very similar. great job!
The maximum size for an image in your signature is 450x110 pixels, please resize your image.
i keep on thinking it's not good bye, i keep on thinking it's our time to fly
FRIENDS FOREVER!!
hehe thank you guys sooo much for the comments ^__^
mybe im that one yove been wating for?what do you think????
Posting Permissions
Bookmarks