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*equinn* · Jan 19, 2007, 03:27 PM

All my life I have been waiting.
Waiting for the one.
The one who will love me for me.
Not as someone else.
I don’t want to live in the shadows of my live.
I want to live it.
But..But I don’t know if I should because I’m not like the other girls here.
I’m crazier, weirder if I most tell the truth.
But if I was would you still love me.
Love me for being who I am
And not for being what I’m not.
so please tell me that you will love me for who and what I am.

*Kasai* · Jan 22, 2007, 03:12 AM

Wow, I actually like this poem. But how you used the repetition I'm not very fond of.

babepooh15 · Jan 22, 2007, 09:21 AM

nice me like!!!!!!!!!!!

so sad!!!!

keep it up

Darkened_Star · Jan 22, 2007, 10:40 AM

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I don’t want to live in the shadows of my live.

I think you ment life instead of live... As for the poem, I can relate to that feeling of fear of rejection. I was so worried about it at one point that I made myself sick. Don't worry about it. I like this poem... good job!!!

*BlueFox1* · Jan 24, 2007, 03:03 AM

I like the style of poem the only suggestion I would make would be change live to life and most to must! Other than that keep up the great work!

B1ad3_k1n6 · Jan 24, 2007, 06:07 AM

wow, i'm impressed, and frankly, i think you caught my girlfriends attitude really well, i think she'd sometimes say something very similar. great job!

*equinn* · Jan 24, 2007, 11:20 AM

hehe thank you guys sooo much for the comments ^__^

mint99 · Jan 24, 2007, 11:37 AM

mybe im that one yove been wating for?what do you think????

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