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    love

    All my life I have been waiting.
    Waiting for the one.
    The one who will love me for me.
    Not as someone else.
    I don’t want to live in the shadows of my live.
    I want to live it.
    But..But I don’t know if I should because I’m not like the other girls here.
    I’m crazier, weirder if I most tell the truth.
    But if I was would you still love me.
    Love me for being who I am
    And not for being what I’m not.
    so please tell me that you will love me for who and what I am.

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    Re: love

    Wow, I actually like this poem. But how you used the repetition I'm not very fond of.
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    Re: love

    nice me like!!!!!!!!!!! so sad!!!! keep it up
    poohs my boo

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    I don’t want to live in the shadows of my live.
    I think you ment life instead of live... As for the poem, I can relate to that feeling of fear of rejection. I was so worried about it at one point that I made myself sick. Don't worry about it. I like this poem... good job!!!

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    I like the style of poem the only suggestion I would make would be change live to life and most to must! Other than that keep up the great work!

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    Re: love

    wow, i'm impressed, and frankly, i think you caught my girlfriends attitude really well, i think she'd sometimes say something very similar. great job!
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    i keep on thinking it's not good bye, i keep on thinking it's our time to fly
    FRIENDS FOREVER!!

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    hehe thank you guys sooo much for the comments ^__^

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    Re: love

    mybe im that one yove been wating for?what do you think????

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