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Reply With Quoteit maybe short but the point does get across, its well done.
im looking forward to more, and i hope that you continue to write more
Love,
Cleansing blood stained hands,
Beautiful as a sweet white dove,
I watch my past from the stands.
Life was so empty before,
But now I have her heart,
And happiness forevermore,
I'm glad I gave it a try from the start.
It led to happiness,
My soul is no longer alone,
Lighting the darkness,
No longer cold as a stone.
She'll have my heart forever,
And I will have her heart as well,
I won't let go of this feeling ever,
It causes my heart to swell.
Kinda short, but I'm rather fond of it. ^.^
Last edited by Self Loving Carnage; Jan 26, 2007 at 12:30 PM.
You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.
it maybe short but the point does get across, its well done.
im looking forward to more, and i hope that you continue to write more
I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
this is my site come and see me there sometime!
Thanks for the compliment. I'm sure that I'll have more to come. This is the first one I've posted on here in a while.
You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.
I like this poem it is short and straight to the point! It also has a very nice flow to it! I appreciate you posting it here on AO and allowing me the opportunity to read it! Keep up the great work!
It doesn't matter if its short because the poem itself is good. This poem leaves me smiling and im hpoing you come up with others soon !
Thanks. Glad you're so enthused about my work. That makes me happy. ^_^Originally Posted by BlueFox1
I will, sometime soon. Thanks for the compliment. ^.^
You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.
your always welcome for the compliment, i like people that express themselfs through writing. so just keep it up. ill keep a eye out for more of your work.
http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
this is my site come and see me there sometime!
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