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    Love

    Love,
    Cleansing blood stained hands,
    Beautiful as a sweet white dove,
    I watch my past from the stands.

    Life was so empty before,
    But now I have her heart,
    And happiness forevermore,
    I'm glad I gave it a try from the start.

    It led to happiness,
    My soul is no longer alone,
    Lighting the darkness,
    No longer cold as a stone.

    She'll have my heart forever,
    And I will have her heart as well,
    I won't let go of this feeling ever,
    It causes my heart to swell.




    Kinda short, but I'm rather fond of it. ^.^
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    Re: Love

    it maybe short but the point does get across, its well done.
    im looking forward to more, and i hope that you continue to write more
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    Thanks for the compliment. I'm sure that I'll have more to come. This is the first one I've posted on here in a while.
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    Re: Love

    I like this poem it is short and straight to the point! It also has a very nice flow to it! I appreciate you posting it here on AO and allowing me the opportunity to read it! Keep up the great work!

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    Re: Love

    It doesn't matter if its short because the poem itself is good. This poem leaves me smiling and im hpoing you come up with others soon !

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    Re: Love

    Quote Originally Posted by BlueFox1 View Post
    I like this poem it is short and straight to the point! It also has a very nice flow to it! I appreciate you posting it here on AO and allowing me the opportunity to read it! Keep up the great work!
    Thanks. Glad you're so enthused about my work. That makes me happy. ^_^
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    It doesn't matter if its short because the poem itself is good. This poem leaves me smiling and im hpoing you come up with others soon !
    I will, sometime soon. Thanks for the compliment. ^.^
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    Re: Love

    your always welcome for the compliment, i like people that express themselfs through writing. so just keep it up. ill keep a eye out for more of your work.
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