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    Love....

    Love....

    I would Wright you a poem.

    If only I knew how.

    I would tell you my feelings.

    Which you should have known.

    I put my heart, life on the line for your answer.

    And for the words "I love you" to come from ones mouth.

    The tears I cried.

    Which I would never let anyone see.

    I wouldn’t let anyone feel me pain but me.

    My life is privet.

    I and only I know what goes on in my head.

    But you were different.

    You knew how I felt I didn’t have to speck.

    You were my only comfort that’s why I love you.

    I love you because...

    You can relate to me and we have so much in common with one another.

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    Re: Love....

    aww... i like it =) it's really nice mahhhh its kinda sad to me tho ....

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    Re: Love....

    It sounds like me and some guy....
    some spelling mistakes, but other than that, great job!
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    Re: Love....

    wow wow wow nice poem ..i love it ..but i feel there is a sad feeling there ...but i should try to write like it ..
    keep uppppp

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Love....

    wow that is a very strong poem to the one you truly love. that is a very cool emotional poem. showing all of what you would do for the one you truly love and express your self to them. this is what i thought of the poem i loved it.
    nathan

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    Re: Love....

    What's with all these love poems, Lizzie Bizzie? Are they for me?

    Anyways, it only pains my heart to see you still misspell some words, but that's no big deal, since you did a neat job with the poem as a whole. It's pretty cool and was a easy-read... So yes, you please keep writing all these love poems for me, and one day, I will see to it that you will receive something special: ?

    Haha, don't get all carried away with your love and kindness. Be more demanding. And keep the great work!

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    Re: Love....

    Nice poem I'm sure alot of people can relate to it.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Re: Love....

    ^
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    What he said. It was sweet, but it sort of breaks the rythm to see grammar mistakes >_<

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