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    Love

    My heart tells me Love is Near by
    As I follow my heart saying he's close by saying hi
    I watch him as he watches me each day and each night.
    I hold a letter with my deep feelings in to the light
    As he does the same holding his feelings as well.
    So there we both know it's love some how inside as he says my name Michelle.

    I thought it was too short.
    Last edited by KuwiRules145; May 15, 2007 at 02:54 PM.
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    As one loves goes into happiness and joy there is no need into stopping ones wish into saying goodbye from there despair into great hopes of gods that one deserves this poem is great and touches one heart into a warmth of light that grows in your chest through death I say this is one of the best poems I have read through all my years Keep it up Kuwi_Rules145.

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    Re: Love

    Quote Originally Posted by dark1angel View Post
    As one loves goes into happiness and joy there is no need into stopping ones wish into saying goodbye from there despair into great hopes of gods that one deserves this poem is great and touches one heart into a warmth of light that grows in your chest through death I say this is one of the best poems I have read through all my years Keep it up Kuwi_Rules145.
    Thats a bit crazy hearing the death part just kidding but THANK YOU!!!!!! I Thank you a lot dark1angel!!!
    Last edited by KuwiRules145; May 19, 2007 at 10:59 AM.
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    Re: Love

    I like this poem the way it is... it leaves me thinking... I really like it... it's really nice, there's something sad and dark in it still it's so sunny, so sweet it just makes me smile!
    Nice work Kuwi!!!
    Last edited by Lasura; May 16, 2007 at 12:32 PM.

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    Re: Love

    Thanks Lasura! I like your poems as well. Thank you very much!
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