love

what is this thing called love?
why do we have such a weak emotion?
i think love is outdated!

matbe i have never been taught how to love.
tell me if people can fall in love so easily
doesn't that mean they can fall out of love easily?

love....
finally u taught me how.......to love
i finally see how wonderful
this felling is.
the way a person hearts beats faster.....
how their knees get weak.
i know i can love someone now

so i have something to say

thank u and i love u......
forever until death do us apart..

well what do u think?

Wow!!! Really amazing, it's really good, but maybe i just like it because i've tryed something like it.... Anyway, really good job and keep it up :2thumbs:

I think it's good... I like it, enjoyed reading it.
Indeed Love is something strange and I'm sure it is like you say- we can fall out of love just as fast as we fall in love... sadly.
The first part is very serious and the second- very sweet... it's nice but it felt kind of weird... hmmm...

thank u guys i tryed something different from the ones i wrote before.....
i tryed to be serious at first but i wanted it to be cute soo that's why it turned out like that:laugh:

wow this poem sounds more serious than the last and its more heart warming

Lets thank the power of love!!! It shall always be with us thats why I love your poems!!! It's always so cute and romantic as well! I hope to see more!!!!:D:

wow ..that's very deep in :2thumbs:love and i like the way you writed this poem ....very cute ....nice i love it ...hope to see more from you ....keep up...

i think it is reali touching!! maybe i think this because me and my boyfriend broke up yesterday!!