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    Love!

    The lives that go in a circle
    there is always something
    that repeats itself , he walks
    away as she stands there
    crying is this the end?


    How the love seems to
    keep going no matter the
    odds , she finds him with
    another and she walks away
    not giving a damn no not for him
    is there still love there or is it gone?

    They hold hands walking on
    a beach with waves crashing
    in the back ground , there love
    cant be denied , she thinks of
    another as she kisses him does
    she know what she wants or is
    she still searching?

    Love it has many ways to
    prove it thrives but for who
    does it need to keep going ,
    the lines are so blurred that
    what was once wrong is now
    right.

    He holds her tightly as a tear
    runs down his cheek he says
    he loves her , he then lets her
    go to another that she desires
    while he dies alone never loving
    another.

    What is it that love holds
    for you ? , love seems to be
    a lie that always teases and never
    satisfies , love my friend isn't for the
    weak of heart because love can be more
    dark than anything you can imagine.
    _____________________________________

    this poem is about love and how it affects
    so many people in different ways , love really
    is simple but it can also be the worst thing
    anyone can have so dont love unless you are
    willig to take the risk.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Love!

    That is absolutely beautiful. ^-^ I love this poem. You are very good at poetry. Anyways I am rating you a 5.

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    Re: Love!

    It's so, awsome! I love it! I love it! I love iiiiiit! 5! It deserves a 5 rating totally!!!!!! You are an awsome poet HolderOfTheDarkChalice!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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    Re: Love!

    Sweet poem it speaks the truth about how love can be. It's wonderful to love someone as long as they love you back cause if they don't it can hurt so much. Alot of people take love for granted and it's a shame that they never truly know how love can feel. I really like this one.
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    that poem is amazing. one of the best poems i have ever read. good job writing it.
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    Re: Love!

    Thats an amazing poem!!!! Very beautiful it's just so romantic to me and just so amazing to read so I hope to see more of your fantastic work!
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    Re: Love!

    It should seem that you still have it..lol

    You know I think this could be good for like an anime show or something because it's really beautiful and the word that you use to make this poem.

    But it’s my thought is.

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    Re: Love!

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post

    How the love seems to
    keep going no matter the
    odds , she finds him with
    another and she walks away
    not giving a damn no not for him
    is there still love there or is it gone?

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    Man this part really stuck with me.. Is there still love there? Sometimes it doesn't matter. Even if there is love, sometime it wont prevent her from walking.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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