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    Devoted Otaku hiei9957 may be famous one day hiei9957 may be famous one day hiei9957's Avatar
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    love

    Love is heart that can become a broken puzzle if torn apart. Love is a dagger forced into a poor lonely soul that can break you or make you whole. Love is a game, shame, lame and a name. Love is a new life and a knife. Love can be like death, it can give or take your breath. Love is a saddness, a sorrow. Love is a new day tomorrow.Love is destressing, depressing and obsessing. Love is glory and a never ending story. Love is a flower that can be weak or be a power. Love is appealing, a feeling and can be hurtful or healing. Love is a fire, a burning desire and can be a dirty lier. Love is a killer and a thriller. Love is a pill that messes with will. Love is a flowing river that makes you cold, makes you quiver. Love is a new door that can be empty or can be more. Love is a passage way, a new beginning, a bran new day. Love is the colors black and blue frome the bruises from the old that still look new. Love is a book, a new way to look. Love is pain that can be lost or can gain. Love is apart of you and me and thats the way it will always be.

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    Re: love

    A great poem. It's enjoyable to read. One spelling error to fix but other than that, it's good. ^_^

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    hum wow that is a good poem hiei although I must say it might look better in stanzas. great job though keep it up. I hope to see more from you.
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    Re: love

    Great job! yeah i agree with Ichigo it would look better in sections, It would be a lot easier to read! Keep up the work! look forward to more!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: love

    great peom
    i enjoyed readind it
    i hope to see more

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