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Nov 02, 2007, 06:28 AM
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 | Love... Love... Love... That is how I call you, How I crave for you. My love... I always called you like that, How I craze for you. Never let the grayish pool and flood. Carve a smile then it'll be good again... I'll do my best as a craftsman, Just don't rain down on my masterpiece. Peace settles down let there be no havoc. Just watch the storm clouds fade away. Sit on my lap and lets get warm and comfy, Let there be no coldness and stay close to me. Oh no you broke my art~! Don't you dare frown again... Fear not my dear, I will fix this~! Here’s a crown for you are my queen... No rest for the wicked, I'll work myself to death if I have to. Just to have you cuddling to my chest, Dying is worth going through with. Faith is what you have in me, To finish this clay kingdom you entrust me with. Lets take time to play and work, Pray it is grand like in your dreams, though I aim higher. Through seasons winter, spring, summer, and fall. Lets build the tall towers and castles. Make them high till they reach heaven's door. With our strong will we'll change clay into gold. Fold the sadness like a carpet and dump it. Hold to our believes... Never look back to the past no matter how bold it is... It's cold and dark leave it behind us. Remember and treasure the memories... Don't let the cries weaken your spirit. Use it to strengthen yourself, And never cry alone for I am here.  douda? (how was it?) Last edited by RayMe; Nov 02, 2007 at 09:17 AM. |
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Nov 02, 2007, 07:35 AM
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| I love you J-Frog!  Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN
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| Re: Love... "Love... That is how I call you, How I crave for you. My love... I always called you like that, How I craze for you." OMG! I love that line!! This was well thought out and beautifully written! I like your wording alot. Keep it up! ^_^
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Nov 02, 2007, 07:56 AM
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| Re: Love... Thank you... this one took alot of time to get it done with cause i was distracted with anime...  sheesh im glad you like it.. ^^ thanks for the comment and for taking time reading it  |
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Nov 02, 2007, 08:26 AM
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| Re: Love... I really like this poem. It's deep and I like a lot of your wordings. Keep up the great work and I'll be looking forward to see more of your poems. [: |
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Nov 02, 2007, 08:28 AM
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| Re: Love... glad you do... this is a present for someone you see.. thanks... i tried my best.. sure.. will do so ^^ thanks for the encouragement |
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Nov 02, 2007, 10:50 AM
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| Re: Love... awww...Ray^^ such a sweet poem you got there... it must be for someone really really special*smiles and pokes you* anyway keep up the good job and hope to see more from you bro^^
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Nov 02, 2007, 01:33 PM
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| Re: Love... i liked the way you put the first word in the poem as the title its gives a really good effect and i understand the poem a lot and yes hope to hear more poems writen from you because you are great 9/10 awsome job ! |
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