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    Awww... this is so nice... wonderful work again and as always You really are good I must say, after I've read this poem for like the 5th time... You just know how to put things in beautiful words...

    A wonderful work Ray ^^ I hope to see more...

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    9/10? thats sad... thank you ^^ i am happy you spend some time and read it ^^

    aww... 5th time.. you dont have to ^^ thank you Laura... sure... will do so

    Hmm wonderful words? naw...*pokes*

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    ^^ very good job! =] i loved how you used descriptive words, excellent job!
    hey you should consider entering the POTM contest^^
    keep up the great work
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    Thank you lil sis ^^

    Hmm i did enter... a few times already...waiting for last month's result.. doubt i'll win though...

    sure.. will do so..

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    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Thank you lil sis ^^

    Hmm i did enter... a few times already...waiting for last month's result.. doubt i'll win though...

    sure.. will do so..

    good!!!!^^ but i have a question

    what is a tanka or a tenka its like november's theme and i dont know how to do it "/
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    eh.. i dont know too.. you got to ask gren about that @.@ im not entering the next month's... i dont know heck about it..

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    Re: Love...

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Love...

    Love...
    That is how I call you,
    How I crave for you.
    My love...
    I always called you like that,
    How I craze for you.

    Never let the grayish pool and flood.
    Carve a smile then it'll be good again...
    I'll do my best as a craftsman,
    Just don't rain down on my masterpiece.

    Peace settles down let there be no havoc.
    Just watch the storm clouds fade away.
    Sit on my lap and lets get warm and comfy,
    Let there be no coldness and stay close to me.

    Oh no you broke my art~!
    Don't you dare frown again...
    Fear not my dear, I will fix this~!
    Here’s a crown for you are my queen...

    No rest for the wicked,
    I'll work myself to death if I have to.
    Just to have you cuddling to my chest,
    Dying is worth going through with.

    Faith is what you have in me,
    To finish this clay kingdom you entrust me with.
    Lets take time to play and work,
    Pray it is grand like in your dreams, though I aim higher.

    Through seasons winter, spring, summer, and fall.
    Lets build the tall towers and castles.
    Make them high till they reach heaven's door.
    With our strong will we'll change clay into gold.

    Fold the sadness like a carpet and dump it.
    Hold to our believes...
    Never look back to the past no matter how bold it is...
    It's cold and dark leave it behind us.

    Remember and treasure the memories...
    Don't let the cries weaken your spirit.
    Use it to strengthen yourself,
    And never cry alone for I am here.


    douda? (how was it?)

    what ...wait ..That was Very Nice Poem I love it ..
    Is that the love you have it Now ...awesome really Ray..well done..

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    lol ^^ thank you my dear friend

    glad u enjoyed it.. and thank you for taking time reading and commenting it ~

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