To love

To love
The perfect man,
To love
The comfort from him,
To love
The sweet embrace,
To love
The tender kiss,

To fear
The reason of love,
To fear
The pain I feel,
To fear
Rejection from him,
To fear
The way I feel,
To fear
Love's embrace,

To cry
From the fear,
To exist
For the pain,
To hurt
From the hate,
To smile
From the happiness,
To believe
In the love,

To love
Will he ever love me back.

This reminds me of the poem I wrote oh so long ago......

Anyway, I feel like you put alot of "To...." in there and I'm not saying it wasn't a nice effect but I could guess what was next and well.....

Not that it was bad!! No, I really liked it!! I find it full of emotion and I could feel it. I mean I have no right to say anything , since I can't really write poems all that well. I hope this didn't seem so bad....

It's beautiful..
In the poem is described how everyone feels...
Sometimes then...
I really like it...
And I can place myself right in it...
Keep it up girl..^_^...