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  1. Jan 15, 2009 12:16 PM #1
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    Love

    This is a poem I have made and Just want to know what anyone thinks of it.

    I hold your hand in mine
    As were walking
    It's been so long since I've met someone like you
    And as the day goes by
    I still think of you
    It's like I'am falling in love again
    I love you,Do you love my too?
    I can't hide these feelings from you
    So in love with you but do you love me too?
    As time passes by
    your still in my mind
    I wish you were mine
    So that I could hold you in my arms
    ....Forever...
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  3. Jan 15, 2009 12:18 PM #2
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    Re: Love

    Aww...it's so sweet you know that...
    It's kinda like a longing you have for someone...
    And it's so alike with everyone...
    It's really a good one...
    It descpripes a person feeling...
    Not only you and that's good...
    That you made a poem that can relate to anyone...
    Keep it up...^_^...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...
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  5. Jan 21, 2009 09:16 AM #3
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    Re: Love

    Quote Originally Posted by mangalovertje View Post
    Aww...it's so sweet you know that...
    It's kinda like a longing you have for someone...
    And it's so alike with everyone...
    It's really a good one...
    It descpripes a person feeling...
    Not only you and that's good...
    That you made a poem that can relate to anyone...
    Keep it up...^_^...
    It was from the heart
    Martin Z
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  6. Jan 21, 2009 06:28 PM #4
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    Re: Love

    wow, that was realy good......i couldnt write anything like that...... keep it up!!
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  8. Jan 28, 2009 08:54 AM #5
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    Re: Love

    Quote Originally Posted by xEmoxTwilightXLuverx View Post
    wow, that was realy good......i couldnt write anything like that...... keep it up!!
    Iam sure you can if you just try
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  9. Jan 28, 2009 09:49 AM #6
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    Re: Love

    that poem spoke to me and it made me realize that you really know when she is the one and that my favorite phrase is Wo Ai Ni which is chinese for I love You and that I will tell u that phrase in a language that only i know and that phrase is E Muja Oui
    His bell is tolling for you

    He wants you to come home
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  11. Jan 28, 2009 11:08 AM #7
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    Re: Love

    I couldnt write anything happy like this in ever, I love it and would like to see more, keep it up!
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  13. Jan 30, 2009 07:13 AM #8
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    Re: Love

    I'am working on a new one about the loss of a loved one.
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