+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 5 of 5

Thread: To Love

  1. #1
    Newbie Jairo may be famous one day Jairo may be famous one day Jairo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2006
    Location
    San Diego
    Posts
    40
    Thanks
    18
    Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post

    To Love




    You never know when the end will come,
    You never know when you’ll get to love,
    It’s initial stage is hard to detect,
    And love is hard to translate.
    The word “love” may exist in the dictionary,
    But my daily living is not according to it’s definition,
    The sentiment of love according to the dictionary,
    Is not what I see in my daily scenery.

    To be in love, is to be lost forever,
    Lost in that person completely.
    Love is a kiss you feel in the midst of tears,
    A kiss you’ve been yearning for all these years.
    Love, is to see her but one day,
    But to remember her all your life,
    Love is to promise-for better or worse,
    When you’re making her your wife.

    Love, is the evening ocean breeze,
    The breeze that reminds you of her kiss,
    Spending a weekend or a day,
    Makes you remember her when she’s away.

    Love is to console her when she cries,
    And give her the happiness she desires,
    Love is to be every moment by her side,
    and in the warmth of her body-there abide.


    now this one is in english. please comment.
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

  2. #2
    Otaku Robo Soccer Champion, Gorillaz Groove Session Champion blackrose92 is off to a good start blackrose92's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2007
    Location
    Texas
    Posts
    484
    Thanks
    69
    Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts

    Re: To Love

    this one is really good
    you are among a few who can paint a vivid picture without actually 'seeing' lol you know what i mean
    i really liked reading it :2thumb:
    ~kudos~
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

  3. The Following User Says Thank You to blackrose92 For This Useful Post:

    Jairo (Apr 04, 2009)

  4. #3
    Otaku SadisticCharm is off to a good start
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Tartarus
    Posts
    104
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts

    Re: To Love

    I really like this.
    And like Blackrose said, it paints a picture in my mind without actually seeing.
    I like the rhyming thing going on too. =D

    Although next time maybe you shouldnt put it in red because it's hard to read. =]
    "You think you know me...? You have no idea."

  5. The Following User Says Thank You to SadisticCharm For This Useful Post:

    Jairo (Apr 19, 2009)

  6. #4
    Devoted Otaku Wuzzler Champion, Stan James Freekick Champion, Sports Bar Champion, Kill Tweety Champion, Bloody Pingu Champion, One Ton Bang Bang Champion receiverofhell may be famous one day receiverofhell's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    In the world where I belong
    Posts
    543
    Thanks
    87
    Thanked 52 Times in 52 Posts

    Re: To Love

    I loved and liked this poem much....
    Like what the other to said before it paints a picture in my mind without actually seeing it
    It almost make me cry a bit....
    It so emotional.....
    and i guees a bit of sad too.
    Great Poem and keep it up^^
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

  7. The Following User Says Thank You to receiverofhell For This Useful Post:

    Jairo (Apr 19, 2009)

  8. #5
    Newbie Jairo may be famous one day Jairo may be famous one day Jairo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2006
    Location
    San Diego
    Posts
    40
    Thanks
    18
    Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post

    Re: To Love

    Thanks. I just wrote whatever I was feeling at that moment. Im glad u like it.
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

+ Reply to Thread

Similar Threads

  1. i still love u..
    By equinn in forum Poems
    Replies: 16
    Last Post: Sep 27, 2007, 12:08 AM
  2. Love
    By Blade X in forum POTM (Poem of the Month)
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: Sep 08, 2007, 08:33 PM
  3. Do We Really Love?
    By HolderOfTheDarkChalice in forum Poems
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: Sep 06, 2007, 03:45 AM
  4. Love
    By Ichigo_06 in forum Poems
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: Jul 09, 2007, 05:49 PM
  5. Love AMV
    By Yukiko_FreeSoul in forum AMV's
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: Jul 27, 2006, 07:33 PM

Tags for this Thread

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts