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    It's not only that I think of you,
    For when I do, I see your face too.
    And it's not only that I dream of you,
    I want you with me, for all of time too.

    I look at the stars, up in the night skies,
    They remind of me the sparkle in your eyes.
    I look at the flowers that blossom in spring,
    And think of the beauty to my life that you bring.

    And how do I tell you, about the tremendous fright,
    I got upon that, very fateful day?
    That day we went out, just you and me,
    The day I feel deeply in love with thee.

    It's not only, that this is so true,
    For I love you with my whole life too.
    You have taken my heart and my soul,
    Without you, I just don't feel whole.

    Now what would you say, if I put it like this,
    That I long for, from you, just one silky kiss?
    Or what would you say, if I wanted so much,
    Just to be near you, to feel your gentle touch?

    Or would you hate me, if I just now asked you,
    For one loving cuddle, a dream come so true?
    So when you read this, please now think of me,
    And know just how much I'm in love with you.
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    BRAVO BRAVA!*crowd applausing loud*
    Excellrnt! I love the way you describe love and after I finished reading it it was like I'm totally amazes and enlightened..
    Through poem you expressed your emotion for you special someone..
    I totally lkike this poem^^
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...

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