Eeeeeeh. Block stanza is not recommended my friend.
I like the use of musical instruments to describe the feelings :P
I'm no pro when it comes to love poems. I wrote this today. Tell me what you think...
LOVE
What is this feeling
that grows steadily within me?
It is the stringing of a harp,
a gentle melody soft and sweet.
It is the beating of a drum
roaring in my chest.
It wraps ‘round me
like a silky lasso.
It runs alongside me
like a springing gazelle.
It is a passion like no other,
a joy unbelievable.
It is longsuffering and strong
and endures forevermore.
It binds me to You
in its power divine.
‘Tis Your love everlasting
that completes me.
Eeeeeeh. Block stanza is not recommended my friend.
I like the use of musical instruments to describe the feelings :P
the love you withhold is the pain you carry.
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