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It might take forever
will reaching the stars
holding strong together
while resisting to the last
theres a small feeling in you
deep inside the light
who knew love was clever
It change m entire life
I can see within you
what's inside that heart
It gives me a feeling
to make a new start
love can hold us stronger
more than you think
we can dream forever
will reaching the new life
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Awe! I love it! Its so true. I love this part but at the same time something might not fit...i dont know how to explain it:
I can see within you
what's inside that heart
It gives me a feeling
to make a new start
Awesome though. It had me from the beginning. Most poems don't.
wow that was deep dude, love really can hold us stronger, hope to see more of ur work.
that was kool man outtasite keep it up"10".........................................
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Aw! I really love this poem. I like the whole part where it says "Love can hold us stronger" and the whole part where it says "I can see within you". I dunno how to explain what I wanted to say. I'm speechless, hah. ^_^!
It might take forever
will reaching the stars
holding strong together
while resisting to the last
love can hold us stronger
more than you think
we can dream forever
will reaching the new life
^those are the stanzas that i like..its cool poem! Love is really powerful! I really love the part "holding strong together while resisting to the last" >=3