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    Love can be clever

    It might take forever
    will reaching the stars
    holding strong together
    while resisting to the last

    theres a small feeling in you
    deep inside the light
    who knew love was clever
    It change m entire life

    I can see within you
    what's inside that heart
    It gives me a feeling
    to make a new start

    love can hold us stronger
    more than you think
    we can dream forever
    will reaching the new life
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    Re: Love can be clever

    Awe! I love it! Its so true. I love this part but at the same time something might not fit...i dont know how to explain it:

    I can see within you
    what's inside that heart
    It gives me a feeling
    to make a new start


    Awesome though. It had me from the beginning. Most poems don't.

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    Re: Love can be clever

    wow that was deep dude, love really can hold us stronger, hope to see more of ur work.
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    that was kool man outtasite keep it up"10".........................................
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    Lost and found please give more critisim than that... and refer to the rules an guidelines on posting in the poems section found >>>http://www.animeonline.net/fanfics-a...-you-post.html
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    Aw! I really love this poem. I like the whole part where it says "Love can hold us stronger" and the whole part where it says "I can see within you". I dunno how to explain what I wanted to say. I'm speechless, hah. ^_^!
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: Love can be clever

    It might take forever
    will reaching the stars
    holding strong together
    while resisting to the last

    love can hold us stronger
    more than you think
    we can dream forever
    will reaching the new life

    ^those are the stanzas that i like..its cool poem! Love is really powerful! I really love the part "holding strong together while resisting to the last" >=3

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