Love can be clever

*Baal* · Nov 03, 2006, 09:40 PM

It might take forever
will reaching the stars
holding strong together
while resisting to the last

theres a small feeling in you
deep inside the light
who knew love was clever
It change m entire life

I can see within you
what's inside that heart
It gives me a feeling
to make a new start

love can hold us stronger
more than you think
we can dream forever
will reaching the new life
__________________

Nympho · Nov 03, 2006, 09:48 PM

Awe! I love it! Its so true. I love this part but at the same time something might not fit...i dont know how to explain it:

I can see within you
what's inside that heart
It gives me a feeling
to make a new start

Awesome though. It had me from the beginning. Most poems don't.

Shippo101 · Nov 08, 2006, 06:30 AM

wow that was deep dude, love really can hold us stronger, hope to see more of ur work.

LostbutFound · Nov 08, 2006, 10:11 AM

that was kool man outtasite keep it up"10".........................................

*jaderabbit* · Nov 08, 2006, 10:20 AM

Lost and found please give more critisim than that... and refer to the rules an guidelines on posting in the poems section found >>>http://www.animeonline.net/fanfics-a...-you-post.html

For3v3r_Lost · Nov 08, 2006, 04:56 PM

Aw! I really love this poem. I like the whole part where it says "Love can hold us stronger" and the whole part where it says "I can see within you". I dunno how to explain what I wanted to say. I'm speechless, hah. ^_^!

Twisted Fate · Nov 08, 2006, 07:28 PM

It might take forever
will reaching the stars
holding strong together
while resisting to the last

love can hold us stronger
more than you think
we can dream forever
will reaching the new life

^those are the stanzas that i like..its cool poem! Love is really powerful! I really love the part "holding strong together while resisting to the last" >=3

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Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 601	Re: Love can be clever Awe! I love it! Its so true. I love this part but at the same time something might not fit...i dont know how to explain it: I can see within you what's inside that heart It gives me a feeling to make a new start Awesome though. It had me from the beginning. Most poems don't. __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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For3v3r_Lost Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: My own little world Posts: 249 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 410	Re: Love can be clever Aw! I really love this poem. I like the whole part where it says "Love can hold us stronger" and the whole part where it says "I can see within you". I dunno how to explain what I wanted to say. I'm speechless, hah. ^_^! __________________ .:\|Myspace Profile\|.:.\|My Forum\|.:.\|My AO Gallery\|.:.\|My December\|:. "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
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Twisted Fate Newbie Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 47 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	Re: Love can be clever It might take forever will reaching the stars holding strong together while resisting to the last love can hold us stronger more than you think we can dream forever will reaching the new life ^those are the stanzas that i like..its cool poem! Love is really powerful! I really love the part "holding strong together while resisting to the last" >=3
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