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    love dream


    My dreams of you can be so wonderful yet some unpleasant.

    I wonder why this happened...



    My great dreams of us are sweet and loving

    My unpleasant I should say nightmare can be so gruesome and gory...



    I’m just so glad these dreams aren’t real... but than again I wish only my
    pleasant ones to be true



    I might as well be in my nightmare not being with you...

    I don’t want to wait three to four years to be with you.

    I want you here with me now feeling the love and trust I place with you.



    I can trust you with my heart...

    I can trust you not to abuse it...

    I can trust you not to break it...




    That's how much I trust my heart with you...

    I know you’re not a heartless person and especially when you have two
    hearts...mine and your own

    So please take good care of mine ...

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    Re: love dream

    Even though life's a long trip,

    you got your friends and him,

    I love your poem a lot.

    Hope you post another again. 10/10


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Re: love dream

    awww^^ so full of love and trust! ^^ great message acrossed
    uhm maybe at the end not so repetitive
    good job over all
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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    Re: love dream

    thank you v much for the lovely comments
    and yes br92 ill try keep that in mind for my next poem kk ^__^ ty

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