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    Unhappy LOVE FOoL

    giving up my words in order to get you
    putting up my thoughts in order to reach you
    I walk upon disgrace just to be with you
    I'd kill myself if i knew that we're through

    longing for this day, i've been wanting you
    waiting everday just to hold hands with you
    I'm wanting your embrace and "i love you"
    I'd die for this day if you want me too

    dreaming of you, even at night i see you
    lying on this bed thinking of you
    I love you and that's all that is true
    I'd erase myself just to start again with you

    "Never tell a man that you love him until he has declared his undying love for you."

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    Re: LOVE FOoL

    i think it was a pretty cool poem^^ the flow of it was kinda choppy in my opinion but i loved reading it thanks for a good read! ^^
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    Re: LOVE FOoL

    I can sadly relate to the feelings in this poem. And If they are indeed your feelings I offer a catously place bit of advice... From someone trying to bounce back from a much simular feeling.

    I don't think they like to be loved more than we love ourselves. I think it makes us less loveable. Less respectable. Sometimes loving someone can be like a prison. We forget how important it it to receive an equal and balanced amount of love in return. Sometimes, we must break free from our prisons built by loving others more than ourselves. So that we may be both worthy and able to RECIEVE love.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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