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  1. Jul 03, 2006 03:41 PM #9
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    Re: Love is forever

    Quote Originally Posted by Immortal Warrior
    Not native, so I assumed. Don't get me wrong kid, it's a good poem and all, but you get my point. Keep writing, and if you need help on something, drop me a PM. Deep stuff too, cuz trust me, I've been there and I know what that is like.
    sure though I think my next poem is ages away
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    Re: Love is forever

    very nice poem. i like it. keep it up!

    Thankx Pyro, for this awesome sig! ^ ^



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    Re: Love is forever

    Your use of very simple words makes it less impressive, if you could use better ones, i'm sure it'll be better. as for the grammatic and spelling errors, you could write it in Words.overall it's beautiful, i'm sure the person intended to have this will like it a lot. good job.
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