very nice poem. i like it. keep it up!
sure though I think my next poem is ages awayOriginally Posted by Immortal Warrior
Your use of very simple words makes it less impressive, if you could use better ones, i'm sure it'll be better. as for the grammatic and spelling errors, you could write it in Words.overall it's beautiful, i'm sure the person intended to have this will like it a lot. good job.