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Reply With QuoteThis is a nice poem
your structure fits the theme of the poem well
great poem!!
The kiss of you lips
My world brightens
You hold me in your arms
My hope rises
I breathe for you
My tears you wipe away
Forever I want it to last
I keep myself from melting
Baby my heart pounds hard
Your name I love to say
Your sweet kisses I crave
Your warmth I love
You whose my other half
Our souls connect
By the touch of your hand
My body shivers
A smile appears on my face
My eyes sparkle
Me you love
You I love
Forever it maybe
♥ (¯'·._.·[ＧＥＩＳＨＡ ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
This is a nice poem
your structure fits the theme of the poem well
great poem!!
Emotions tend to lose their strength when put in words, So I prefer to speak only what is absolutely necessary..
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thank you. I'm glad you like it.
♥ (¯'·._.·[ＧＥＩＳＨＡ ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
Hmm. I like the choice of words, just not the wording. Lol.
The kiss of your lips
brightens my world.
You hold me in your arms,
my hope rises.
Something like that wouldve have made the poem a little bit more enjoyable. Good job.
Seduced by Flesh
This poem expresses love. i liked the way you express those feelings into words. Your poem fills my mind with imagery.
Great job. ^^
i suggest, to divide this poem into stanzas.
Also to use punctuations is a must too...
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
Awesome Cierra!!! I could soooo feel the love from this poem!!Awesome job!!
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
the emotion of love is so strong in the is poem and it really get that across to the reader! In my personal opinion great job!!! And I definitely agree with Shini!
Cecee its beautiful like all of your work. keep it up gurl
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