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    Smile love forever urs

    F loating above your words of love
    O ur distant minds beautifully entwined
    R ivers flowing from time to time
    E arth and moon forms a clue
    V isualizing a place for me and you
    E nduring through the stars above
    R apidly finding the one I love

    Y our sensitive eyes are so divine
    O ver and over I say, this is my time
    U nforgettable you are to me
    R ealizing that we are meant to be
    S lowly I think of only, you and me

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    Re: love forever urs

    Aww..lol. How cute! Didn't know you wrote poems though..wow...who would have thought lol!
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Awesome job! I loved the way the poem flowed through smoothely, it was really good. Hope to see more.

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    Re: love forever urs


    It's so beautiful and sweet... It's so wonderful.. the flow is amazing, it's graceful, sweet, loving, caring.. it's just so wonderful...
    Last edited by BrokenLover101; Oct 08, 2008 at 12:25 AM.
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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